I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi my name is Paige. That is really interesting.I like how you put what they live in. It reminds me of the time I saw a lizard.You could have put like some more facts in but other than that it is really good.
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Hi my name is Paige. That is really interesting.I like how you put what they live in. It reminds me of the time I saw a lizard.You could have put like some more facts in but other than that it is really good.
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