It was a beautiful day in the African Savannah. I did not want to migrate with the herd because It scares me.
And my mum and dad almost got eaten alive and I got but I was lucky my dad saved me . The crocodile and the lions played tug of war with me and it was scary. Because they are my enemies!
I was taking a walk along the river bank when I saw my dad stop in his tracks. He roared to tell the herd to run. But I was slow the lions caught me and I fell in the warm slimy water and it was scary for me. And I could taste the yuck dirty water. I could hear the herd of buffalos.
And the crocodile and the lions had a tug of war with me. The crocodile sunk its massive teeth into my tail it felt very very sore. I did not like it. It was scary for me. And I smelt yucky like the lion's breath.
I was saved by the herd of buffalos and I was scared. I did not like it. And I wish to see you again and fight once. I was happy and sore when I went back to the herd.
Great work Tahnesha, keep it up I like your animal ,and I like all your interesting facts. What is your favorite part of your animal. I like the first part of your story. I think you need to see where you put your full stops.
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