I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, July 29, 2016
It's not a planet. it's our home.
Labels:
Mind mup,
Narrative,
planning,
Screecastify.,
Space chimp,
Term 3 2016,
Writing
Thursday, June 30, 2016
Animal adaption.
We have been looking at animal adaptions and how they help them survive in the wild.
I made a clay model of a giraffes neck for my adaption. I also found some information about it.The giraffes neck is 1.5-1.8 meters long
A giraffes habitat is in the African savannah.
Friday, June 17, 2016
Learn About ANZAC day.
W.A.L.T describe what life was like for men and women in WW1 through a diary entry.
Friday, June 3, 2016
W.A.L.T learn about lizards.
Friday, May 20, 2016
The worst lunch day ever. (First Draft)
It was a beautiful day in the African Savannah. I did not want to migrate with the herd because It scares me.
And my mum and dad almost got eaten alive and I got but I was lucky my dad saved me . The crocodile and the lions played tug of war with me and it was scary. Because they are my enemies!
I was taking a walk along the river bank when I saw my dad stop in his tracks. He roared to tell the herd to run. But I was slow the lions caught me and I fell in the warm slimy water and it was scary for me. And I could taste the yuck dirty water. I could hear the herd of buffalos.
And the crocodile and the lions had a tug of war with me. The crocodile sunk its massive teeth into my tail it felt very very sore. I did not like it. It was scary for me. And I smelt yucky like the lion's breath.
I was saved by the herd of buffalos and I was scared. I did not like it. And I wish to see you again and fight once. I was happy and sore when I went back to the herd.
Labels:
Battle at Kruger park,
First Draft,
recount,
Term 2 2016,
Writing
The calf's very very bad day.( First Draft)
Term 2 Week 3
W.A.L.T recall events through the eyes of an animal.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when my recount has a
- Title
- Orientation: When? Who? Where? Why?
- Sequence of events: What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
- Personal Comment: How did the events make you feel?
First Draft
The calf's very very bad day.
“I was taking a walk along the river bank when I saw my dad stop in his tracks. He roared to tell the herd to run. But I was slow the lions caught me and I fell in the warm slimy water and it was scary for me. And I could taste the yuck dirty water. I could hear the herd of buffalos.
And the crocodile and the lions had a tug of war with me. The crocodile sunk its massive teeth into my tail. I did not like it. It was scary for me. And I smelt yucky like the lion's breath.”
I was saved by the herd of buffalos and I was scared. I did not like it. And I wish to see you again and fight once. I was happy and sore when I went back to the herd.
Labels:
Battle at Kruger park,
First Draft,
recount,
Term2 2016,
Writing
Friday, May 6, 2016
Tahnesha's Animal Creation.
Kangyzebgiraffe
Diet: Herbivore.
Grazing on grass, leaves and roots, they swallow their food whole, regurgitating a cud to chew on.
Head:Zebra
The Kangyzebgiraffe uses sounds to signal when all is safe or when a threat occurs.
Tail:Kangaroo
They need their tails to help them balance as this form of moving works better at fast speeds than slow speeds
Legs:Giraffe
The kangyzebgiraffe is the tallest mammal, reaching as high as 5.5 meters (18 feet).
Life Span: 25 years in the wild
Lions are their major predators; others are hyenas, wild dogs, leopards, and cheetahs.
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