My armpits are sweaty like hot water my face is as red as a apple I was reluctant and scared. I was screaming as I went down the Bright orange slide. Then I went into colourful ball pit I went so deep. After I hit the ground and a lollipop stuck onto my face, so I tried to get it off it came off straight away.
I started to climb back up but it was no use I was running out of breath. but I kept on trying and trying Then I saw a plaster it fell on my mouth. I tried to get it off I got it off but I fell then I grabbed onto a stick that held me. I was pulling myself up it got harder and harder by the minutes, but I was not giving up so I pulled the stick out of the wall and dug it back in. and done it till I got to the top.
Then I saw my mum she said I was looking for you and said let’s go home and have dinner What did you do today I said I went down the slide and fell in the ball pit and it went so deep it took me like 6 minutes to get back up and I saw a skeleton and a deep hole and like you say whatever goes in a hole never comes out.
I never want to do that again. I will never go back there it is scary if we go back there i am not playing at the playground I will rather go thru the drive thru and get the food or stay in the car we’ll you get the food.
Let’s go home and have something else like nachos or mc donalds or even Burger king. I just don’t want to go there my mum said let me go down the slide and then my mum was at the top of the ball pit my mum said it was just your imagination.
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