Alma
One day it was a really snowy morning and all of the amazing shops were covered in snow, Hi my name is Alma I am a 12 year old girl. When I turned 12 I Was skipping because I was excited to write on the blackboard because it is a national thing. Then this doll caught my eye because it looked exactly like me.
Then it was gone off the pillow and then I looked in all of the windows and then I found it so I tried to get in threw the door but it was locked so I threw a snowball then the door opened so I went inside and had a look at it then there was a toy by my feet.
So I picked it up and then the doll was gone again so I had a look at my feet and all around the shop. Then I found it. It was in all of the scary dolls. Then when I touched the doll it had a flashback so it started blinking so I ran out of the shop and will never go back in there again
To be continued.
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