The Girl in the red coat.
I was in a humongous city called Paris, I did not like Paris because it was boring it was boring and disgusting because people eat snails and frog legs. It is easy to lose something in this gigantic city. I wish I could move to another city that is smaller.
Hi my name is Millie and I am a seven year old girl and I always wore a red coat because I love red. The coat is as red as an apple. I was in a carnival and I got candy floss to eat it was 5 colours tall, it was so big. Then I went to a game that is called shoot the duck. I was excited and my heart was pumping and it felt like it was going to explode as I ran to the game.Then I turned around I could not see my mother and Father. I was scared, terrified and nauseous.
Then this nice and helpful lady came and took me to the help centre because she knew that I was scared. They helped me find my parents by talking on the microphone and said “ This girl in a red coat lost her parents can they come to the help centre”. Then they came running to the help centre. I said “ I will never run off like that again.” my parents said I will always listen to you Millie. We should go home and have dinner. We are having yummy dinner.
We are having takeaways for dinner. Takeaways is Maca’s BK KFC Hot Chips. I want to have Maca’s. When we finished eating our dinner we went to bed.
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