I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, September 22, 2017
My fractions DLO.
Partly cloudy.
Partly cloudy.
The sky was as blue as the sea and the music was calm and relaxing, The clouds were as pink as cotton candy and Ice cream. All the birds were delivering special things to people. I think I am going to have a bad day because the cloud I work with makes dangerous stuff, first there was a Green scary crocodile got put into a white sack after that there was a Brown and white goat that got put in a pretty white sack.
The Dark grey cloud made a hedgehog and it was very very prickly I screamed OUCH That is really sore. When I came back I saw all of the other clouds having fun then I flew away and I then I asked if I could have some football clothes so I don’t get hurt.
Then I went back to the dark cloud when he was crying then I made him happy again. He made an electric eel and we were a happy family
The End.
Thursday, July 6, 2017
Ormie.
Ormie.
I was in a blank white and green room. Hi my name is ormie and I am 10 years old I was walking in a room. Then I smelt something it was cookies so I looked on top of the fridge.
There they were on top of the fridge so I tried climbing to get them. Then I used a broom and it did not work. So I used a stool that did not work and then some ice fell on me and I had a glass in my hand. Then I Tried some books and An Ironing table and A bowling ball.
Then I used some boxes to make stairs so I could climb up. I also had a bib on. Then I used a trampoline and I made a hole in it. Then I used some plunges and I climbed up and then the fridge opened.
To be continued.
Friday, June 30, 2017
The piano
The piano
There was an old man and he was thinking about his old job as a medic and his wife and his childhood. He saw his wife and his wife's name is ally and his name is jorge.
Because he played the song that he is doing at his mums funeral and at his wife’s funeral and it was the first thing he learned for his mum. He also made a funeral for all the people that died in the army.
So he was living by himself and he was so lonely so someone started living with him. It was a man so he was not lonely any more. “He said yay someone is living with us now.”
He was so happy and he said to his room mate I am going to die soon because I have cancer and I hope you find someone to live with you. So thank you for taking my house for me.
Then he died at the hospital and the last word he said was bye and then he went u to heaven with his wife and mum. His mum said “hi my son” and his wife said “Hi my husband” and then he said “hi mum and my wife.”
Then he had a funeral and he was played his favorite song and he had his friends and children. His friend played his favorite song and he got buried beside his mum.
Alma
Alma
One day it was a really snowy morning and all of the amazing shops were covered in snow, Hi my name is Alma I am a 12 year old girl. When I turned 12 I Was skipping because I was excited to write on the blackboard because it is a national thing. Then this doll caught my eye because it looked exactly like me.
Then it was gone off the pillow and then I looked in all of the windows and then I found it so I tried to get in threw the door but it was locked so I threw a snowball then the door opened so I went inside and had a look at it then there was a toy by my feet.
So I picked it up and then the doll was gone again so I had a look at my feet and all around the shop. Then I found it. It was in all of the scary dolls. Then when I touched the doll it had a flashback so it started blinking so I ran out of the shop and will never go back in there again
To be continued.
Friday, June 23, 2017
The girl in the red coat.
The Girl in the red coat.
I was in a humongous city called Paris, I did not like Paris because it was boring it was boring and disgusting because people eat snails and frog legs. It is easy to lose something in this gigantic city. I wish I could move to another city that is smaller.
Hi my name is Millie and I am a seven year old girl and I always wore a red coat because I love red. The coat is as red as an apple. I was in a carnival and I got candy floss to eat it was 5 colours tall, it was so big. Then I went to a game that is called shoot the duck. I was excited and my heart was pumping and it felt like it was going to explode as I ran to the game.Then I turned around I could not see my mother and Father. I was scared, terrified and nauseous.
Then this nice and helpful lady came and took me to the help centre because she knew that I was scared. They helped me find my parents by talking on the microphone and said “ This girl in a red coat lost her parents can they come to the help centre”. Then they came running to the help centre. I said “ I will never run off like that again.” my parents said I will always listen to you Millie. We should go home and have dinner. We are having yummy dinner.
We are having takeaways for dinner. Takeaways is Maca’s BK KFC Hot Chips. I want to have Maca’s. When we finished eating our dinner we went to bed.
The End.
Thursday, May 18, 2017
Buster the boxer.
“Hi my name is Buster and I am a dog.”
I was sitting in my best friends room watching her jump on her bed and she was so happy because she was getting a trampoline. I went into the lounge and sat down.
I saw the animals were jumping on my best friend’s new trampoline I was so angry “I said it should be me on that tramp ?”
When I woke up I saw the trampoline and the door opened so I went out the door and leaped in the air and tumbled on the trampoline and started bouncing on it and my owners were petrified but I was happy. I was barking as I was jumping on the trampoline.
Then my friend Zowie joined me on the trampoline it was so much fun then we went inside for the presents and we had breakfast We had pancakes for breakfast they were yummy.
Then we opened the presents and I got a new bed and new toys. My friend got A new trampoline and new clothes I was so happy and so was my best friend. When we finished opening the presents my best friend had a hot chocolate and I had warm milk.
The end.
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