The worst lunch day ever. (First Draft)

It was a beautiful day in the African Savannah. I did not want to migrate with the herd because It scares me.

And my mum and dad almost got eaten alive and I got  but I was lucky my dad saved me . The crocodile and the lions played tug of war with me and it was scary. Because  they are my enemies!

I  was taking a walk along the river bank when I saw my dad stop in his tracks. He roared to tell the herd to run. But I was slow  the lions caught me and I fell in the warm slimy  water and it was scary for me. And I could taste the yuck dirty water. I could hear  the herd of buffalos.

And the crocodile and the lions had a tug of war with me. The crocodile sunk its massive teeth into my tail it felt very very sore. I did not like it. It was scary for me. And I smelt yucky like the lion's breath.

I was saved by the herd of buffalos and I was scared. I did not like it. And I wish to see you again and fight once. I was happy and sore when I went back to the herd.

The calf's very very bad day.( First Draft)

Term 2 Week 3

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?

First Draft

The calf's very very bad day.

“I was taking a walk along the river bank when I saw my dad stop in his tracks. He roared to tell the herd to run. But I was slow  the lions caught me and I fell in the warm slimy  water and it was scary for me. And I could taste the yuck dirty water. I could hear  the herd of buffalos.

And the crocodile and the lions had a tug of war with me. The crocodile sunk its massive teeth into my tail. I did not like it. It was scary for me. And I smelt yucky like the lion's breath.”

I was saved by the herd of buffalos and I was scared. I did not like it. And I wish to see you again and fight once. I was happy and sore when I went back to the herd.

Tahnesha's Animal Creation.

Kangyzebgiraffe

Diet: Herbivore.

Grazing on grass, leaves and roots, they swallow their food whole, regurgitating a cud to chew on.

Head:Zebra

The Kangyzebgiraffe uses sounds to signal when all is safe or when a threat occurs.

Tail:Kangaroo

They need their tails to help them balance as this form of moving works better at fast speeds than slow speeds

Legs:Giraffe

The kangyzebgiraffe is the tallest mammal, reaching as high as 5.5 meters (18 feet).

Life Span: 25 years in the wild

Lions are their major predators; others are hyenas, wild dogs, leopards, and cheetahs.

Tahnesha's learning goals

Battle at Kruger National Park Sequence.

                                                   W.A.L.T recall events in order

	The herd of buffalo are walking along the river bank.
	The lions are resting in the sun.
	The lions are looking at the buffalos  and are ready to pounce on them.
	The lions are chasing the buffaloes away.
	The lions are chasing the buffalos.
	The lions are playing tug of war with a calf and a crocodile.
	The buffaloes are chasing the lions.
	The herd of buffalos saved the calf.
	The baby Buffalo is rescued by the herd of buffalo.