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Thursday, July 6, 2017

Ormie.

Ormie.

I was in a blank white and green room. Hi my name is ormie and I am 10 years old I was walking in a room. Then I smelt something it was cookies so I looked on top of the fridge.

There they were on top of the fridge so I tried climbing to get them. Then I used a broom and it did not work. So I used a stool that did not work and then some ice fell on me and I had a glass in my hand. Then I Tried some books and An Ironing table and A bowling ball.

Then I used some boxes to make stairs so I could climb up. I also had a bib on. Then I used a trampoline and I made a hole in it. Then I used some plunges and I climbed up and then the fridge opened.

To be continued.

4 comments:

  1. Hi Tahnesha, it's Michaela. I like your good writing it really funny. But next time can you please put a capital letter for Ormie.

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  2. Hi Tehnesha, it's Inaka here, I really like what you have made It is really cool! <3

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  3. Hi Tahnesha its Ryleigh I like your story I think that its funny but maybe next time you shouldn't put it did not work a lot. anyway it was great!.

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